writing

this week our title was how does the water cycle works well my next step was adding detail
so i did that i don't know but i didn't get a response so I'm hoping that i get a good sign so i am going to show some evidence of my work.

well last week we were writing and our title was healthy habbits and i was learning to
use paragraphs and adding detail I am hopping that when she checks my work tonight i am hopping that Mrs is going to give me gold paragraph's are my next step and i need to work on is adding detail and here is some evidence is a photo of my stikers 

writting

title: how does the water cycle works

1. evaporation
2 .condensation
3. precipitation
 

opening statement
there are three things to think about if we are talking about the water cycle that is evaporation,condensation,precipitation but if you want to talk about what they mean and what the order they are in the water cycle.

1. Evaporation is the first thing in the water cycle. Evaporation
is when the sun takes water from lakes,streams,rivers and the sea.
it takes the water for the clouds.

2.Condensation is the 2nd thing in the water cycle .
Condensation is when the steam rises.
so when the clouds go dark it rains.

precipitation is when it rains because the clouds are full
and then when its to full it rains and precipitation is another
word for rain,snow,steel and hail.

closing statement

so that is how the water cycle works and the order of the water cycle
the first one is evaporation then condensation then precipitation.

Reading

last week we are learning the meaning of the word my word was accurate means a higher level word for completing your mahi and then we were doing what does we are learning for meaning means well
then i said you read something you know what it means and that is all if you wanna know more go to my BLOG.

maths

this week we are learning if we are using 10 numbers to make 37
by using 7,3,1,5 but then we figured that they are all odds and 37 is
a odd number then we did odd+odd=even like to make 16 you can use
4 number at total and they were 5,3,1 they are odd and 5+5+3+3=16
so 4 odds =a even

2018,writting

1.covering your mouth
2.washing your hands
3. sharing your food and drink bottle

opening statement

1.If we have people who have the flue that we would
 not wont to spread around to people we would cover
our mouth and wash our hands at all times.



1.like when someone coughs into your inner elbow
 but if you cough anywhere you will be spreading GERMS
 and making people sick  so don't cough anywhere.



2.If you go toilet or finish playing outside always always
wash your hands or els you will be preventing germs
so when you finish a toilet go wash your hands or when
you finish playing outside wash your hands.


3.if  you share drink bottle or food you will get sick
because the person you share it with he might have
the flue its sliver is on the bottle  and you gize are sharing
germs.


conclusion
GERMS can be made by anything not washing your hands
coughing anywhere and sharing your bottles so cover your mouth
wash your hands and don't share bottles and would you wont to be sick?

This week we were driving our learning with out our teacher and I was doing writing it is a persuasive writing and it is all about how does rubbish affect our environment.

Intro

I strongly agree that rubbish affects the wildlife,waterways and  land because of pollution.

1.Firstly I strongly agree that the rubbish affects wildlife,waterways and land because we humans drop the rubbish we had on the ground. And then the wind blows it in the stream,river and the sea so we should not be polluting our stream,river and the sea so do not pollute.

2.secondly I agree that  the rubbish affects wildlife,waterways and land because our sea creatures like a turtle it's  favourite food is jellyfish and he/she might think it a plastic bag is a jellyfish but the turtle will eat it any ways and a bird will eat anything they will find so we should not leave our rubbish in the sea.

3.Thirdly I agree that the rubbish affects wildlife,waterways and land because if we put our rubbish in the wrong one like if we will put something recyclable into landfill we can not make anything out of it and they dig a big hole and put the landfill in so don't put it in to the wrong bin.

Conclusion

So we all should not put our rubbish in the wrong bin or don't polled our ocean,rivers and streams and here is some advise if you care for the animals you should come and help us clean up our awa's